In this post we were learning how to spot a rip and what to do when we are in one.
Thursday, 8 August 2019
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Thanks for sharing mikayla your work is cool! i like how you made your background and how you made it your facts are very interesting good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Krowzhynn. Thank you for the comment I put in a lot of effort doing the background and it turned out pretty good and I am pleased with it. Thank you once again for the comment.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikayla my name is Riley and I have just Read your blog post about rips. I love how you have added detail to your drawings and colour so it's not just plain and boring. I love how you added the most Important thing to remember is don't panic! Ka- kite from Riley
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DeleteThanks for the feedback I really appreciate it. I really enjoyed doing it.
Thanks Mikayla
Hi I am Shae and I go to Te Hapara school. I liked the way you made the current in the water.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Carmel. I really like the colourful background that you made. I like the way that you showed us a drawing about the rip current. Maybe next time when you do another one of these maybe try and fit your words into the shape.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikayla my name is Jade Arahanaga. I'm from Te Hapara school. I like how you made it really creative and nice and clear to understand and I love the way how it is so nice and bright! Great job!
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora I am Karlee. I think that you did really well in your work. You showed really good advice about when you are swimming in the ocean. Well done! Great work! Keep it up!
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mikayla, my name is Kayla, I am from Te Hapara School. I liked how you gave me some tips for when I am caught in a rip. I also liked how you drew a diagram of what a rip might look like. Maybe next time you could make a screencastify explaining more about this blog. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Honor from Te Hapara school. I like that you are telling people
ReplyDeletewhat to do when you see a rip I have. I like your picture! From Honor
Hi Mikayla my name is Thomas and I am a year 6 student from Te Hapara. I really liked how colourful your work was, also I like how you added facts to the work and I also liked the rip currents in the water. Nice work!:)
ReplyDeletekia ora mikayla I love how you added lots of details to your work
ReplyDeleteand lots of colours in your work keep working so you get better and better.
hi my name is Chyla i am at Te hapara school.
ReplyDeletei like to play netball and i like the way you are teaching others.What kind of sports do you like to play? or do you not play sports
Hello Im Katie-Rose and I go to Te Hapara school, I loved the way you did that little picture because it is very detailed I loved it, I like how you told other people like us what to do in a rip current.
ReplyDeleteHave a good day Mikayla!
hi my name is Ataahua i go to Te hapara school.
ReplyDeletei like rugby & play it almost every friday & saturday.
Kia Ora Mikayla I am Savannah from Te Hapara school, I love all the information you have put into your blog post, and that you told us what to do in a Rip also how you told us that when you see foamy water there could be be a Rip by it. I thought that maybe next time you could add the words on the shapes a little better so for some people it isn't too hard to see. :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Joshua and I go to Te hapara School and I am a year 6 student. I love how you had lots of different ways on how to survive a rip, it was great. Happy blogging. 👍
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikayla my name is Zyah. I am from Te hapara school.I like the way that you have told us what a rip current looks like you explained it really well. Well done Mikayla!
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DeleteThanks Zyah
DeleteI really enjoyed doing this project and I hope you learned something new from this post.
Thanks Mikayla
HI my name is kaycii huriwai my school is Te hapara Gisborne after my school i go to YMCA.Do you like soccer or ruby well i like soccer my best firnds is ngakau kade paki dakota etuate and his brother goodbye thaks for me to met you have a great day bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikayla my name Is Aaliyahna. I am from tehapara school. I like the way that you told us what a rip current looks like you explained it really well . well done Milkayla.
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