Wednesday, 8 May 2019

The weekend news


               The weekend news



yesterday my family went to the nice cold wet beach. we went to get in the water and whoosh! a giant wave came and drenched me and my brother. we decided to go boogie boarding. I was riding a wave in when I saw we had drifted from mum. AND THAT IS WHY YOU NEED TO  BE CAREFUL AROUND THE SEA

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora, Aamaria here from Paroa school.
    I would like to say you did an awesome job!
    Maybe next time try to add capital letters and not start a sentence with (and). But other than that it was a good piece of writing.
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    Bye!

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