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Wednesday, 8 May 2019
The weekend news
The weekend news
yesterday my family went to the nice cold wet beach. we went to get in the water and whoosh! a giant wave came and drenched me and my brother. we decided to go boogie boarding. I was riding a wave in when I saw we had drifted from mum. AND THAT IS WHY YOU NEED TO BE CAREFUL AROUND THE SEA
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Kia Ora, Aamaria here from Paroa school.
ReplyDeleteI would like to say you did an awesome job!
Maybe next time try to add capital letters and not start a sentence with (and). But other than that it was a good piece of writing.
Come and check out my blog here's the link: https://paroagreyaamariab.blogspot.com/
Bye!